7 Tips To Strengthen Your Screenplay’s Dialogue

7 Tips To Strengthen Your Screenplay’s Dialogue

7 Tips To Strengthen Your Screenplay’s Dialogue

Christina Lee
Christina Lee
3 years ago

Writing dialogue is more than just studying how other people speak. It helps to move your story forward and gives a voice to what you’ve put down on paper. Here are some tips to make this voice as strong as possible.

**1.**Do Your Research

An upper class woman in Victorian England is going to have a very different life than a teenage boy in 2010.

Know who your character is and how they navigate life based on their occupation and social status. Find out as much as you can about the career they have. Know the political atmosphere of the time period you choose.

Not only will this give you and your story credibility, you get relevant details about how your character expresses themselves and the impact their background would have on how freely they speak.

Voila, your character has a voice that makes their story unique.

7 Tips To Strengthen Your Screenplays Dialogue

2. Don’t just Edit, Rewrite

The best way to ensure your script is as strong as it can be is by writing it twice.

The first time you write, focus on just getting everything down. “Get your story from point A to point B, let the characters speak to one another and get used to how it feels to write them. Keep your first draft with you as you write what you know from memory and watch it come together in a whole new light. It’s hard work, but well worth the result” says Karen Moore, a creative writer.

3. What they Don’t Say Matters

Humans are complex and expressive creatures, but sometimes we suck at communication.

We say “I’m fine” when we don’t really mean it. We talk around our feelings and don’t say what we mean because truth can be hard and conflict is exhausting.

Like us, our characters are fighting with something bigger than themselves which is going to influence what they do and say, not to mention the way their body language betrays them as they struggle to withhold information.

7 Tips To Strengthen Your Screenplays Dialogue

4. Watch for the “As you know, Bob…” Trap

Yes, exposition has its uses but, when a character speaks, it should be to move the story forward, not to delay it.

The “as you know, Bob” trope is when one character relays information to another that both already know and the audience doesn’t.

Think of a detective arriving at a crime scene and talking to a first responder. It implies that the world around them and the context of the scenes thus far have not been enough to explain what is going on, using dialogue to do so instead. This is not necessarily bad, but it’s important to ask if there is some other way to convey this information.

5. Use Voice Overs and Speeches, but Sparingly

Think of this as a tour guide walking you through a museum. A voice that guides you to understand what you’re seeing and the context of it in ways you would not have thought so before.

Your world itself should be able to say a lot about what is happening, but speeches can be a quick shortcut.

When information about a character comes from the character themselves, it can be especially moving and powerful, not to mention make for an iconic, quotable scene. Be careful not to overuse them though and keep the story moving.

7 Tips To Strengthen Your Screenplays Dialogue

6. Make use of Conflict

Conflict is part of life and everything is controlled by it. As previously mentioned, our characters do not exist in a bubble: they are constantly at odds with the world, the people in it, and even themselves.

But, the most interesting and some of the most powerful conflicts a character can have is with each other. Even if they aren’t screaming at each other, your characters will do (or say) whatever it takes to come out on top.

7. Get to the Point

When you introduce yourself to someone, you don’t give them every detail of your life.

What you share may vary from person to person but, overall, it’s the details you find the most interesting and best paint you in a certain light. “Same goes for your characters. Every author worries about how they are perceived but the audience is always going to fill in the blanks themselves. They will think about what happens in between jump cuts and have a picture in their heads of your character’s life after the screen cuts to black. If it doesn’t move the story forward, consider whether or not it’s needed and cut accordingly” says Laura Morey, a professional writer at State of Writing.

The bottom line is, that dialogue adds a level of complexity that visuals don’t. It makes your characters human and makes them real, memorable things that we can connect to our own lives. While these tips are not gospel, I hope they can help you take a deep breath, trust your instincts, and help you along as you enjoy the process. Happy writing!

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5 Comments on Christina's Article

Karen Crider
Screenwriter
Dialogue is my favorite tool in writing. I think it's improved by listening to how people use the language everywhere one goes. There's a difference between the way a teenager converses with her peers, not only in the use of her words, but in the type of words she uses  compared to someone who is older. So many variables make up language. We are all unique human beings, each with our own idioms and inflections, defining who we are by what we say and how we say it... 
3 years ago
Daniel Stuelpnagel
Screenwriter, Author, Producer
Thanks for a coherent list of dialogue tips! There are so many flavors of dialogue we apply to screenwriting, emerging from characters and situations, and liberating characters to express themselves as facets of the writer's psyche that can connect vicariously with readers and audiences. Dramatizing situations, reactions and relationships is so enjoyable once the characters are really motivated and speaking for themselves in authentic and even urgent ways. Well-crafted dialogue that feels like improv in service of 'cinema verite' style can really take a screen story in unexpected directions, I've just completed writing an ensemble-cast adventure that has been a repository of numerous breakthroughs in craft, especially dialogue!
3 years ago
Regarding #4, if you want to explain something to the audience, a great way to do it is the way they did it in the miniseries "Chernobyl" with the conversation between Legasov and Scherbina in the helicopter on the way to the disaster site (if you haven't seen it, it's in episode 2, "Please Remain Calm")!  Or, if you want to make a more detailed explanation than this format allows, you can opt for a court trial scene (once again, "Chernobyl", but this time episode 5, "Vichnaya Pamyat")!
3 years ago
Great show to watch for Halloween, BTW!
3 years ago
Maurice Vaughan
Screenwriter
Hey, Dennis. "Chernobyl" is one of the most thrilling shows I've watched.
3 years ago
York Davis
Screenwriter, Playwright, Singer, Actor, Researcher
Good post Christina Lee. I like the use of visual body language where possible.
3 years ago
Leotien Parlevliet
Author, Screenwriter
Clarifying blog post, Christina. I sometimes use dialogue and visual body language in combination. . 
3 years ago
Maurice Vaughan
Screenwriter
Thanks for sharing the tips, Christina. This blog comes a day before I rewrite dialogue in my feature script.
3 years ago
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