Hi
I recently started writing scripts,I would love some feedback on script I wrote,you can download the PDF script on Amazon studios,here is the link https://studios.amazon.com/projects/193081
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I stopped reading after page 1.
Format is wrong, typos, no character descriptions, talky, static visual opening.
Thank you for the feedback,seems like I still have a lot to learn,I'll work on improving my writing.thanks again ,I appreciate it.
If you ever want to come and talk about your writing, Obed, do message me.