Filmmaking / Directing : Critique by Gianluca Di Tullio

I am in need of feedback on a Film project I just finished a rough edit for, My film teacher has said I need to improve the story and that he has showed people the film and they don’t get it. He also mentioned that the notebook in the film needs more significance when it doesn’t and that means he clearly didn’t read the script and he wasn’t prepared for the notebook to just be a vehicle for realization. I do agree with his criticism on the character William H and how he should have more motivation to fight. But I’m just looking for more opinions, Feel free to direct message me to view the film.