Not trying to self promote or anything. I wrote a comedy sketch and I'm trying to improve it. Any thoughts or feedback would be greatly appreciated. Thank you!
Link: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1lPY_B9MRNKrTaI14NkBd3UHknPwDt2mu/view?usp=sharing
Title: Swiped!Genre: Comedy
Page count: 4
Logline: After being away from the dating world, Miles goes out to a bar to try his luck in a changed landscape of apps and sexuality. He's not prepared.
Hey Eric, this is Beth from the Stage 32 team. I just wanted to let you know I moved your post from Screenwriting to Your Stage, as it fits much better there. That's where members post their work for specific feedback—see the description at the top. Best to you!