How are you I hope i find you well. Can you please tell me what you think about my writing
SHE IS NOT A HE
She's a grown up not a child anymore
Too many responsibilities
6pm no worries she will be home like always
7pm no she will be home like always
But not today.
It's too late she is already gone
You now regret that she's gone
All this years you never asked why she is always late
Dark days but she still struggles
Each and every day she does
But all she wants is to bring food on the table
She's gone raped.. Dumbed in the river
They made her suffer
They planned it and now they succeeded
Beautiful young soul gone forever
You didn't escort her in the morning
At night you never waited for her at the bus stop
You call yourself the boss
Yes but you always let her finish work around 7pm
You got a car but she didn't
She worked for you but you never cared
Yeah its too late
But it's time to change
Care for those baby girls
They might have grown but they still need protection.
Powerful. Great words, Divine. Keep them coming.
Thank you ☺️
Thank you
Hey Divine Chieza! So great to have you here sharing this energy! Very well done. I'm so glad to have you in the community.
Thank you... I would also like to share what I wrote.. It's not that big its just a small story.