Screenwriting : Logline Example: The Wizard of Oz by Tammy Hunt

Tammy Hunt

Logline Example: The Wizard of Oz

How do you sum up your story idea?? #writer #logline #synopsis #treatment #outline #script #story

Mark Deuce

Nice One Tammy Hunt

Pat Alexander

That was my reading of The Wizard of Oz also

Eric Christopherson

Citizen Kane: Super rich guy can't get over losing his sled.

Amanda Toney

Wow…that’s a very different description!

Sam Sokolow

Awesome share, Tammy Hunt! I remember this - it went crazy viral when it was posted. Here's an article about it and some other darker takes on loglines from beloved films. Anyone have any others to share? https://ew.com/article/2012/10/26/wizard-of-oz-movie-description/

Matt Dycus

Titanic: When a boat sinks, men die because they aren't women and children.

Maurice Vaughan

This is how I write a logline/sum up an idea, Tammy Hunt:

“After/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (the main flaw that the main character has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the main character’s personality) _______ (the main character’s position/job/career) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes).”

Sometimes I put the inciting incident at the end:

“A _______ (the main flaw that the main character has to overcome in the script or an adjective that describes the main character’s personality) _______ (the main character’s position/job/career) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story and try to add the obstacles here) to/so/in order to ________ (stakes) after/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion).”

Wal Friman

Batman. A spoiled brat complaining about crime takes the law into his own hands.

Mark Deuce

Love that Maurice Vaughan

Mark Deuce

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