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A WHISPER IN THE WOODS
By Samuel Windle

GENRE: Thriller, Crime
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Ten years after the mysterious disappearance of a young girl in a quiet village, a determined detective reopens the cold case, uncovering dark secrets hidden deep within the woods and a town willing to do anything to keep them buried—even if it means silencing the truth forever.

Arthur Charpentier

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Maurice Vaughan

Sounds interesting, Samuel Windle! I like the “uncovering dark secrets hidden deep within the woods and a town willing to do anything to keep them buried” part! And fantastic title!

I think your logline is really long. It’s 48 words. I don’t think you need “even if it means silencing the truth forever” since you wrote “a town willing to do anything to keep them buried.” If you cut the end, your logline will be 40 words.

Marcos Fizzotti

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Nate Rymer

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Tasha Lewis

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