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After entering a questionable art school, a precocious eleven-year -old Renaissance kid must use his talent and genius to stop a egomaniacal art teacher from bombing all the art works in Florence.
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Eleven-year-old Leonardo da Vinci is the nerdy tech Dennis the Menace of the Renaissance. He lives in the sleepy hamlet of Vinci where he alternately amazes and terrorizes his family, father, Ser Piero and stepmother, Albiera. most of his inventions are brilliant catastrophes, but it's not his fault.
Every time he tries to be a normal boy who obeys the rules, his pet crow, Crow, whispers an incredibly great idea that's sure to work(this time). But no one believes that the crow is responsible. No one can hear him talking except Leo. Crow knows how to tap into Leo's big dream of becoming the first human to fly. The boy is given an ultimatum... learn a trade. So, his father send him to Baker's Apprentice School in Florence. He's quickly thrown out for mischief. Starving and alone Leo and Crow wander through Florence and find the Guiseppifrutti School Art, where they meet the evil, flamboyant Guiseppifrutti (a 15th century Salvador Dali). Leo becomes a student. While there, he learns about the Master's plan to bomb Florence, destroying his rivals and also meets eleven-year-old Mona Lisa, a poor street girl who wants to learn to paint. Leo and Mona must save the day!
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The artwork is hilarious. Great loglines.
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I'd watch this, Marta Jorgensen. There's an extra space before "-old" in the logline.
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