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A wealthy woman donates her country ranch to build an LGBTQIA+ elderly home when she discovers her adulterous wife is going to gift the property to her mistress. The contribution will only be accepted if the wives work together on the project.
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The Luna´s are well-known for their philanthropic work supporting the LGBT community, they donate Lotus Ranch to a nonprofit organization to build a care facility for the elderly when one partner discovers her adulterous wife is going to gift the property to her mistress. After personal disputes and legal matters, the contribution is declined by the respectable organization, and will only reconsider it with the condition the wives work together in the project. As events unfold, they encounter make or break situations that will test their relationship.
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Before the Beyond (100 mins) “Mr. and Mrs. Smith” meets “I care a lot”
A generous donation is made to end a case of infidelity. This will only be accepted if the couple works together. How´s this?
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