Two officers fight to survive a night patrol of betrayal, violence and torment when they get trapped in a house with a dark force that's beyond anything they were trained to handle.
Unique concept, Ryan L. Jones! I think your logline needs a better flow. Something like "*Two officers fight to survive a night patrol of betrayal, violence and torment when they get trapped in a house with a dark force that's beyond anything they were trained to handle.*"
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Unique concept, Ryan L. Jones! I think your logline needs a better flow. Something like "*Two officers fight to survive a night patrol of betrayal, violence and torment when they get trapped in a house with a dark force that's beyond anything they were trained to handle.*"
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Thanks Maurice Vaughan I agree. That's a great improvement. Much appreciated!
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You're welcome, Ryan L. Jones.
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