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SYNOPSIS:
Zombie Cartel unfolds, focusing on the story Phil played by Dwayne Johnson a high stakes Casino gambler, and his desperate attempt to settle a staggering 20 million debt owed to his uncle. With the weight of his uncle's expectations bearing down on him, Phil concoct a daring plan to repay his debt by teaming up with his cunning cousin Trevor played by Kevin Heart, and two of their loyal friends Kenny and Mike. All four will infiltrate the heart of the Sonoran Desert where a legendary Cartel's hidden wealth lies. Mexico is plagued by a devastating Zombie outbreak, and their goal is to steal enough money to settle Phil's debt and secure their future.
I really like the concept and title, Trisha Trisha!
I think your logline needs some work. Here's a logline suggestion: "To pay off a $20 million debt, a high-stakes Casino gambler teams up with his cunning cousin and two friends to find money that the Cartel hid in a Zombie-infested desert."
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Sound great Maurice, love all the help I can get.