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An emotional scarred detective must track down a serial killer ring before it strikes again.
SYNOPSIS:
Ally learns one is never truly safe
A young woman is searching through images on her Instagram feed, when she stumbles upon a picture of herself which she didn't take. The picture was posted four minutes ago...
A serial killer stalks your every move, every step you take. Watching, waiting for their time to strike....
Ready or not, death is coming for you... Cause there's no place to run.... no place to hide.....
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Why does this sound like me ?? Lol
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Lol. Redacted is still in the writing process.
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Fix the typos and shortened it a bit to make it way more powerful, there are too many unnecessary words. The short synopsis is much better than the logline maybe incorporate the two together :)
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