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Logline : Vortex Pax “ Morro Bay” episode 1
Molly, Asian / American , is a grad student in Marine Biology she takes an Internship at a Lab in Morro Bay, CA, while driving for Lyft, she is asked to join an unusual group of Vortex investigators , who prevent people from using Vortex’s and Technology to alter history.
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