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ASSASSINS' GUILD OF AMERICA

ASSASSINS' GUILD OF AMERICA
By Chad Ayinde

GENRE: Action, Comedy
LOGLINE:

When the world’s deadliest assassin is placed on injury reserve, his departments cost-cutters come to collect with deadly consequences for all. 

Robert Russo

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Arthur Charpentier

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Nate Rymer

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Maurice Vaughan

Great title, Chad Ayinde! :D

I think your logline needs some work. I suggest getting rid of "Guess they forgot he was the best for a reason." I think that'd be better in the pitch.

Here's a logline suggestion, but some of it might not match your story since I don't know it: "When the worlds' most prolific assassin is placed on injured reserve, the organization's cost-cutting measures nearly kill him. Armed with nothing, he tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/etc. _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes)."

Tasha Lewis

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