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Recruited to decipher the language of an ancient civilization recently discovered on Mars, an archaeologist and her ex-husband find themselves in a desperate race to expose a shocking truth about humanity’s place in the universe.
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Far too many adjectives and extraneous segments, but otherwise decent Logline.
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Great set up, but the explanation of their goal makes it sound like a generic, "expose the aliens to the public" kind of movie.
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