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In a post-apocalyptic world gripped by nuclear fallout, a gifted young woman, alongside her surrogate father, embarks on a perilous quest to develop a system designed to return planet Earth back to its original state.
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In a world ravaged by nuclear apocalypse, ferocity and pestilence unfolds amidst the ruins of Earth where survival and retribution intertwine to create what shall be known as “Winter Wonderland”. The story follows Eve, a gifted and ambitious young woman as she braves the unforgiving wasteland to develop a revolutionary system known as The Atomic Atmospheric Decontaminator, under the guidance of her surrogate father figure, Norm.
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ACT I: Manifest Destiny
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As nuclear devastation engulfs the planet, Eve’s life takes a tragic turn, leaving her orphaned and alone amidst the chaos. In a stroke of fate, she is miraculously saved by Norm, a mentor who soon takes on the role of Eve’s father figure.
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Just as the toxic effects of nuclear winter begins to set in, Norm and Eve find refuge in an underground bunker where Margie, Norm’s wife, gives birth to Adam, who is later destined to become Eve’s soulmate.
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Determined to counter the horrors of nuclear winter, Eve commits herself to the monumental task of developing the Atmospheric Decontaminator alongside Norm. As they venture into the wasteland, Earth’s devastation becomes painfully evident. Skies shrouded in darkness, mutated savages controlling all territories, and a barren landscape underscores the magnitude of their mission.
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While companied with Norm, passing time as they pursue their mission in the wasteland, Eve discovers an unexpected talent for archery, a valuable skill that will be of aid to her survival and growth.
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ACT II: Sins of the Father
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Years pass, and significant progress is made on the Atmospheric Decontaminator, but one critical challenge continues to persist. Arguments between Norm and Eve intensify, focusing on their seemingly hopeless quest to source the elusive isotope Plutonium-238, a crucial component to their intricate system.
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Margie’s sudden illness strikes panic into Norm, Adam and Eve. Thus, causing Eve to defy Norm’s orders and venture out alone into the perilous wasteland for the pursuit of antibiotics. In a harrowing encounter with a group of vicious mutants, Eve narrowly escapes with her life from an attack so heinous that it leaves her moral values for compassion irreparably scarred, but her determination undeterred.
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ACT III: It Started With a War
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Eve matures into a resolute young adult, driven by her commitment to completing the Atmospheric Decontaminator. Frustrated by Norm’s unprecedented reluctance, Eve decides to take matters into her own hands, and vows to complete the system despite his objections. However, the final and most challenging obstacle still remains; acquiring Plutonium-238.
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Tensions escalate between Norm and Eve, leading to a dramatic confrontation that leaves Eve without the necessary means required to secure this crucial substance. Come to find out, Norm underestimates Eve’s brilliant and resourceful mind. After defying Norm’s orders yet again, Eve sneaks out with the precise location for the final element, and journey’s west through the wasteland to acquire Plutonium-238.
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With Plutonium-238 finally secured, Eve’s optimism is suddenly shattered when she falls victim to the treacherous traps of a seemingly friendly older woman. Deceived and captured by a ruthless cult of mutants, Eve’s life precariously hangs in the balance. Norm, despite his previous reluctance, is compelled to embark on one last perilous mission to rescue Eve from the clutches of this ravenous cult.
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Bound by a bond stronger than blood, Norm and Eve’s reunion reveals the true extent of their unbreakable connection. Eve’s archery skills prove just as invaluable as Norm’s rifling skills as they fend off the threats of the mutant cult. Norm makes a triumphant sacrifice, allowing Eve to escape with the precious isotope.
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Eve’s release from captivity marks a turning point as she emerges more determined than ever before to complete the Atmospheric Decontaminator once and for all. With only Adam left to accompany her, the battle-hardened Eve introduces Adam to the terrors of the wasteland as she takes him to the Atmospheric Decontaminator.
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The foundation laid by Norm becomes a beacon of inspiration as Adam and Eve prepare to bring Eve’s life’s work to fruition. With the Atmospheric Decontaminator now fully operational, Adam and Eve unleash its transformative power upon the desolate world. The skies begin to clear, revealing a sun-drenched landscape that had long been forgotten. Nature begins to reclaim its dominion, allowing the air to become crisp and pure once again.
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“Winter Wonderland” is a gripping tale of dedication, resilience and sacrifice. This story culminates in a triumph of the human spirit, demonstrating that even in the face of insurmountable odds, determination, love, and selfless sacrifice can ultimately lead to the restoration of what had been lost. Against a backdrop of pestilence and desolation, Eve’s journey from helpless orphan to noble savior serves as a beacon of hope, illustrating that even in humanity’s darkest hour, the potential for renewal and redemption is always within reach.
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Incredible poster, @Kevin Goodyear! I really like the concept. I think your logline needs to be tighten up a little. Here's a logline suggestion: "In a post-apocalyptic world gripped by nuclear fallout, a gifted young woman and her surrogate father embark on a perilous quest to develop a system that'll return Earth to its original state."
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