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OUT IN THE WEST
By Claire V. Riley
In 1865, when it was a crime to be queer, a sharpshooting gender outlaw poses as a man so she and her southern belle lover can escape a brutal husband and create a new life as a married couple out in the west.
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this is not a logline - research what it is and try again - a logline is like a hook! 25 words or less best of luck https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline
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Hi, Claire! Conceptually, I could not love this more & I already can't wait to see this :)
I do think that you could streamline this, though & as much as I LOVE your title, I think that it would be more impactful if you don't also include that title at the end of your logline.
Wow, I can't wait for this to get made!
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