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LIGHT OF THE HUMANOID
By Tiffany Wade
When Chad Matthews's creation became hacked, it is up to AI Creators to work on fixing their creation.
SYNOPSIS:
Chad Matthews works at Kit Fornea Computer Science Incorporation. The following day, Chad's creation receives a phone call and it is from a computer hacker. Unfortunately, the humanoid hacker enabled Krongertons location, which leads to the humanoid family's abduction.
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I like where your going with this concept, however it needs to have a very strong & direct jump in your face punchy logline.
DON'T GIVE UP KEEP WORKING ON IT!
Your synopsis is way too short and not interesting enough think about it you can go online and read other synopsis and you're going to see what I'm talking about they they will show you and watch a few movies that deal with AI like Spielberg's AI That's a good example because everything is done over and over again nothing is original it's just how you tell the story, that's what makes it original.