By Cinematics, I mean EVERYTHING ELSE it takes to make a movie! (Sound, Editing, Stunts, Cinematography, Set Dressing, Props, Visual FX, Costumes, Makeup, Hair, etc. etc. etc.)
Yes, I know I’m putting the majority of the filmmaking process into one category, but without understanding the first 6 step...
Expand postBy Cinematics, I mean EVERYTHING ELSE it takes to make a movie! (Sound, Editing, Stunts, Cinematography, Set Dressing, Props, Visual FX, Costumes, Makeup, Hair, etc. etc. etc.)
Yes, I know I’m putting the majority of the filmmaking process into one category, but without understanding the first 6 steps of this formula, you are setting yourself up for “filmmaker mediocrity” which is writing unimaginative scripts with unbelievable characters that create dull and unimaginative films that contain…
1. Clichéd character arcs: Character journeys that follow predictable paths without surprise, struggle, or meaningful transformation. When arcs feel recycled or unearned, characters lose credibility and impact. A compelling arc should reveal internal conflict, challenge belief systems, and result in genuine change.
2. Flat, one-dimensional characters: Characters that lack depth, motivation, or complexity, making it hard for audiences to care about their journey. Their actions often feel arbitrary, disconnected from any believable inner life. Without contradictions or vulnerabilities, they fail to reflect human behavior in a meaningful way.
3. Inconsistent tone and pacing: Films that feel disjointed due to poor rhythm, jarring shifts in mood, or scenes that drag without purpose. Sudden tonal changes can confuse the audience or undercut key dramatic moments. Uneven pacing disrupts story flow and weakens overall engagement.
4. Lack of dramatic escalation: Stories that fail to build tension or raise stakes as they progress, resulting in flat momentum. When conflict remains static or unresolved, the narrative loses urgency. Escalation creates the structure needed to maintain interest and emotional investment.
5. Lack of visual storytelling: Failing to use composition, color, lighting, or editing to enhance story meaning, resulting in visually bland filmmaking. When images are not used intentionally, the film misses opportunities to convey mood, perspective, or theme. The story then becomes overly reliant on dialogue to communicate key ideas.
6. Overreliance on exposition: Telling the audience everything through dialogue instead of showing it through action, subtext, or visual storytelling. Excessive explanation slows momentum and leaves little room for discovery. It also undercuts the audience’s role in interpreting character behavior or narrative development.
7. Overused camera setups: Relying entirely on shot–reverse shot or static wide shots without using the camera to tell the story visually. This limits emotional range, tension, and perspective within a scene. Without dynamic or purposeful framing, the visual language becomes repetitive and uninspired.
8. Poor sound design: Neglecting audio quality, ambient detail, or sound transitions, which breaks immersion and weakens the impact of scenes. Inconsistent levels or missing atmosphere can make a scene feel artificial or incomplete. Sound choices should reinforce environment, tension, or character experience.
9. Predictable plotting: Stories that follow cliché beats without surprise, tension, or originality, resulting in disengaged viewers. Audiences can often guess what will happen next, reducing their investment in the outcome. Original twists, withheld information, or moral complexity can add needed unpredictability.
10. Sloppy continuity: Mismatched cuts, misplaced props, or inconsistent lighting that distract from the flow of the scene. These errors break the illusion of the world and can reduce viewer confidence in the storytelling. Continuity requires detailed planning across departments to maintain coherence.
11. Unmotivated blocking: Actors move without purpose or connection to the emotional beats of the scene, making performances feel staged and artificial. Movement should be tied to objectives, tension, or discovery, not just coverage. Blocking that lacks meaning creates visual clutter rather than dramatic clarity.
12. Weak scene transitions: Scenes that start and end abruptly, with no visual or emotional connection from one moment to the next. This can make the film feel fragmented and directionless. Thoughtful transitions help carry momentum, mood, or theme across sequences.
Remember, making a film isn’t just about grabbing a camera, pulling in a few friends, and rushing into an idea that hasn’t been fully developed. “Foundational filmmaking" is about making thousands of interconnected creative decisions that come together on screen with purpose. Every choice you make, whether it’s framing, costume, pacing, or sound will shape the way the audience experiences the story and without that consistency, even the strongest concept can fall apart.
That’s why skipping any part of the "basic filmmaking foundation" is a serious risk. No level of visual polish can rescue a story built on weak fundamentals. Master the core principles first, and everything else becomes a powerful extension of your vision. Great films are the result of intentional decisions, sharp instincts, tireless refinement, disciplined collaboration, and sometimes, even lucky accidents!
Thanks for sharing these steps, Peter D. Marshall. I think flat, one-dimensional characters, predictable plotting, and lack of visual storytelling kill a movie more than anything....
Expand commentThanks for sharing these steps, Peter D. Marshall. I think flat, one-dimensional characters, predictable plotting, and lack of visual storytelling kill a movie more than anything.
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Hey Peter D. Marshall that is more than 6 rules. All good though, this is going on my wall as a note to watch for these mistakes while reading scripts for coverage writing. I am in the first half of a...
Expand commentHey Peter D. Marshall that is more than 6 rules. All good though, this is going on my wall as a note to watch for these mistakes while reading scripts for coverage writing. I am in the first half of a screen reading training program from Hollywood Gate Keepers with Carolyn Carpenter and look forward to receiving scrips and producing the best coverages in support of writers who devote so much of their time and energy into the magic on screen. thanks again for this have a great weekend