(Please note that this is done as it would be a script for a comic. I have a background in comics, so I use comic terms for the script. I do hope to get this made as a movie or short TV show. I'm looking for feedback on the pages, if you can take the time to read and leave a review in the comments. replace panels with shot.)
Ch5 Pg 7
(Ch5 Pg6 Panel 1 - Close-Up Panel)
Garerit, who explains with a calm, confident smile, clearly anticipating the giant's confusion Garerit is still standing with a relaxed posture, arms crossed as he speaks. His demeanor is assured, and his eyes convey a sense of understanding that knows what he's doing. The small branches behind him are gently swaying in the breeze, symbolizing the task he will handle.
SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "The branches, though, are light enough to be carried. It's the perfect balance."
(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 2 - Full-Width Panel)
Garerit climbs onto the tree. He's quickly scaling it with ease. This moment emphasizes Garerit's agility and resourcefulness, as he's able to adapt to situations quickly. The background shows the dense forest around them, providing context for the scene and the enormity of the task they're facing. Garerit's quick thinking is evident as he prepares to ride the tree instead of carrying it.
SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "I'll climb up! It'll be easier if I ride the tree."
(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 2 - Medium Panel)
Garerit is sitting on the evergreen hidden in the tree's branches, his feet dangling down. He appears comfortable and confident, almost as if he's been in this position before. The tree's branches spread out around him, creating the illusion that he's helping to support the branches. From this angle, it seems like Garerit is doing the work, even though Garna is still carrying the tree. The tree trunk continues to rest on Garna's shoulder, with Garerit's weight distributed, which is easily balanced by the giant.
SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "Let's see if I can make it look like I'm carrying all the weight."
SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "I got hold of all the branches, let's move forward and get to the castle."
(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 3 - Full-Width Panel)
We see the task in motion. Garna is lifting the massive tree trunk, which he carries with ease, though his face shows a slight strain due to its weight. Meanwhile, Garerit has found a spot in the tree to sit and hide among the branches. Garna, who is still adjusting his grip on the trunk, contrasted with Garna's strength and slow, steady pace.
SB (Garna - Thought Bubble): "He's keeping pace with me. He doesn't seem to struggle at all!"
(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 4 - Full-Width Panel)
Garerit is riding on the tree with a look of satisfaction. Garna continues to carry the tree trunk, but now there's a certain lightness to his steps- he's carrying both the trunk and the tailor without much effort. The forest around them continues to stretch wide, showing the distance they've already covered and the impressive teamwork between the two. Garerit's cleverness is on full display here, as he manages to manipulate the situation to his advantage without losing any of his charm.
SB (Garna - Thought Bubble): "He's small, but the branches are no burden to him! He's Clever!"
Ch5 Pg 8
(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 1 - Full-Width Panel)
Garerit is perched on the tree, now almost invisible behind the branches, making it appear as though he's holding them up with all his might. Garna continues to carry the tree trunk, his massive body hunched slightly under the weight, supporting the entire tree. The image emphasizes the illusion, with Garerit giving a subtle smirk as he realizes how easily he's tricking Garna into thinking he's helping. The giant is unaware of how the tailor has turned the situation to his advantage.
SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You're good at this!"
SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Been doing this type of thing for most of my life."
(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 2 - Full-Width Panel)
Garna walks as he continues carrying the tree trunk, now with a more relaxed and confident stance, while Garerit leans back and enjoys the sway of the branches. The background should depict the wide open forest, with mountains looming in the distance, showing that their journey is far from over. The image conveys a sense of manipulation and trickery, with each using their strengths in the way that best suits them.
SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You have!"
SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "The road ahead is long, Garna. We'll need to quicken the pace if we want to make it before nightfall!"
SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Right."
(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 3 - Close-Up Panel)
Garerit's face shows his satisfied grin as he glances over at Garna from the far end of the tree. His eyes twinkle with amusement as he realizes how successful his plan is. The playful aspect of his personality comes through here, as he's enjoying the wit-based victory. He's using his small wit to manipulate the situation, and the panel highlights that Garerit knows he's in control, even if Garna doesn't fully realize it yet.
SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "He has no idea. This is going perfectly." "We're doing so well at this pace we just might make it before sundown."
(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 4 - Close-Up Panel)
Garerit's satisfied grin as he rides the tree, looking ahead. His face is pleased with his success, and there's a twinkle in his eye, signifying his awareness of the illusion he's created. This small moment emphasizes how Garerit can outsmart the giant while maintaining a sense of humor and confidence in the situation. There's a playful element to Garerit's character here, and this panel highlights the ongoing theme of wits over brute strength.
SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "Let's see how long it takes him to realize he's carrying me."
SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You're doing great, better than expected."
(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 5 - Wide Panel)
In this wide panel, Garerit and Garna continue along the road with the tree. The illusion of Garerit holding up the branches remains intact, and the two of them make their way through the forest. The size contrast is evident again, with Garerit small on the tree, while Garna carries the trunk. This panel shows them moving toward the next stage of their journey, and it visually reinforces the teamwork and misunderstanding between the two characters.
SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Let's keep going. We're almost there."
SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Right, I'm bearly tired at all."
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Meriem Bouziani I think Tom Clancy made companion non-fiction books explaining submarines to accompany his fictional books about submarines.
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Hahaha I have a 100 page Tech bible that’s part of my series Bible…
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Thank you for this information.
It makes me even more excited about writing my own companion book Michael David...
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It makes me even more excited about writing my own companion book Michael David
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Thank you for sharing your experience.
A hundred pages to explain your tech idea shows how layered and complex it really is.
I’m genuinely curious to know what it’s about Alex Bright...
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A hundred pages to explain your tech idea shows how layered and complex it really is.
I’m genuinely curious to know what it’s about Alex Bright
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Also, Mary Pope Osbourne wrote companion non-fiction volumes for her fictional Magic Tree House series. I used to get those for my kids.