Screenwriting

Hello creatives,

I have a question for all sci-fi screenwriters.

Have you ever considered developing a companion textbook explain the science behind your story?

The screenplay format doesn’t allow for heavy scientific detail—if you try to insert everything into the scenes, the audience becomes overwhelmed, and the narrative loses momentum.

In my case, I feel I’ve developed strong sociological insights in my story The Silent PFC War, especially about civilization, development, and the history of humanity.

I also explored some truly deep and complex time paradoxes in The De-Evolution Game: Paradoxes Unleashed, and I would love to write about them separately.

I’m curious to hear your thoughts or past experiences with this.

Happy sci-fi writing!

I'm wondering what some of your favorites are. I noticed in the OWAs that I haven't seen most of the shows they are inspired by. I guess I need to watch a lot more tv, lol. I thought I already watch too much! I really loved the writing on Black Sails. From beginning to end it had strong character development, good story, and a really beautiful ending. Which series do you like the writing enough to recommend?

I want to post my pilot screenplay, but I took it down. I suppose I'm scared? I'm proud of it, but scared to post it fully as I have dyslexia, and this is my very first screenplay! Any feedback would be appreciated. :)

INT. FARMHOUSE - DINING ROOM - NIGHT

7:30 PM

Dinner. The warm glow of overhead lights. Rice, soup, grilled mackerel, banchan spread across the table. Steam rises from the bowls.

Areum talks animatedly about the hike, gesturing with her chopsticks. Sungmin actually engages, teasing her about her photography obsession. Hyunwoo and Soojin exchange pleased glances—this is what they wanted.

Nari lies beneath the table, tail swishing hopefully whenever someone drops food.

AREUM

—and then Nari jumped in the water and splashed everyone—

SUNGMIN

You pushed me toward the water!

AREUM

I did not!

SOOJIN (smiling)

Both of you were soaked.

HYUNWOO (to Areum)

Did you get any good pictures?

AREUM (nodding enthusiastically)

So many! I want to make a photo album.

SUNGMIN (groaning)

Please don't show them to your friends.

AREUM

Why not? You look cute with Nari!

SUNGMIN

I look like an idiot—

SOOJIN

Language.

SUNGMIN

—I look ridiculous.

AREUM (grinning)

Exactly.

Sungmin flicks a grain of rice at her. She squeals.

HYUNWOO (trying to be stern, failing)

Hey. Table manners.

But he's smiling. This moment—this ordinary, beautiful moment of family dinner—is the last normal thing that will happen in this house.

FADE TO BLACK.

HOLD ON BLACK FOR THREE SECONDS.

The ambient dinner sounds fade away, replaced by silence.

FADE IN:

INT. FARMHOUSE - MASTER BEDROOM - NIGHT

11:03 PM

Darkness. The room is still, quiet. A digital clock reads 11:03, casting faint green light.

Soojin sleeps on her side. Next to her, Hyunwoo snores softly.

Everything is peaceful.

For now.

11:04 PM

11:05 PM

11:06 PM

The clock ticks over.

Then—

BANG.

Distant. Outside. But loud enough.

Soojin's eyes snap open. She lies frozen, staring at the ceiling in the darkness. Her breathing quickens.

Was that real? Did I dream it?

She glances at Hyunwoo. Still sleeping, still snoring.

She's about to close her eyes again when—

From downstairs: WOOF. WOOF. WOOF.

Nari's bark. Sharp. Urgent. Wrong.

SOOJIN (whispering, nudging him) Hyunwoo... Honey...

He doesn't stir.

SOOJIN (CONT'D) (louder, shaking his shoulder)

Hyunwoo!

HYUNWOO (jerking awake, groggy)

Wha—what?

SOOJIN

Nari's barking.

They both lie still, listening.

WOOF. WOOF. WOOF.

Insistent. Alarmed.

HYUNWOO (rubbing his face)

Probably an animal outside...

But even as he says it, something in his voice betrays uncertainty.

(Please note that this is done as it would be a script for a comic. I have a background in comics, so I use comic terms for the script. I do hope to get this made as a movie or short TV show. I'm looking for feedback on the pages, if you can take the time to read and leave a review in the comments. replace panels with shot.)

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(Ch5 Pg6 Panel 1 - Close-Up Panel)

Garerit, who explains with a calm, confident smile, clearly anticipating the giant's confusion Garerit is still standing with a relaxed posture, arms crossed as he speaks. His demeanor is assured, and his eyes convey a sense of understanding that knows what he's doing. The small branches behind him are gently swaying in the breeze, symbolizing the task he will handle.

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "The branches, though, are light enough to be carried. It's the perfect balance."

(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 2 - Full-Width Panel)

Garerit climbs onto the tree. He's quickly scaling it with ease. This moment emphasizes Garerit's agility and resourcefulness, as he's able to adapt to situations quickly. The background shows the dense forest around them, providing context for the scene and the enormity of the task they're facing. Garerit's quick thinking is evident as he prepares to ride the tree instead of carrying it.

SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "I'll climb up! It'll be easier if I ride the tree."

(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 2 - Medium Panel)

Garerit is sitting on the evergreen hidden in the tree's branches, his feet dangling down. He appears comfortable and confident, almost as if he's been in this position before. The tree's branches spread out around him, creating the illusion that he's helping to support the branches. From this angle, it seems like Garerit is doing the work, even though Garna is still carrying the tree. The tree trunk continues to rest on Garna's shoulder, with Garerit's weight distributed, which is easily balanced by the giant.

SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "Let's see if I can make it look like I'm carrying all the weight."

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "I got hold of all the branches, let's move forward and get to the castle."

(Ch5 Pg7 Panel 3 - Full-Width Panel)

We see the task in motion. Garna is lifting the massive tree trunk, which he carries with ease, though his face shows a slight strain due to its weight. Meanwhile, Garerit has found a spot in the tree to sit and hide among the branches. Garna, who is still adjusting his grip on the trunk, contrasted with Garna's strength and slow, steady pace.

SB (Garna - Thought Bubble): "He's keeping pace with me. He doesn't seem to struggle at all!"

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Garerit is riding on the tree with a look of satisfaction. Garna continues to carry the tree trunk, but now there's a certain lightness to his steps- he's carrying both the trunk and the tailor without much effort. The forest around them continues to stretch wide, showing the distance they've already covered and the impressive teamwork between the two. Garerit's cleverness is on full display here, as he manages to manipulate the situation to his advantage without losing any of his charm.

SB (Garna - Thought Bubble): "He's small, but the branches are no burden to him! He's Clever!"

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Garerit is perched on the tree, now almost invisible behind the branches, making it appear as though he's holding them up with all his might. Garna continues to carry the tree trunk, his massive body hunched slightly under the weight, supporting the entire tree. The image emphasizes the illusion, with Garerit giving a subtle smirk as he realizes how easily he's tricking Garna into thinking he's helping. The giant is unaware of how the tailor has turned the situation to his advantage.

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You're good at this!"

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Been doing this type of thing for most of my life."

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Garna walks as he continues carrying the tree trunk, now with a more relaxed and confident stance, while Garerit leans back and enjoys the sway of the branches. The background should depict the wide open forest, with mountains looming in the distance, showing that their journey is far from over. The image conveys a sense of manipulation and trickery, with each using their strengths in the way that best suits them.

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You have!"

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "The road ahead is long, Garna. We'll need to quicken the pace if we want to make it before nightfall!"

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Right."

(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 3 - Close-Up Panel)

Garerit's face shows his satisfied grin as he glances over at Garna from the far end of the tree. His eyes twinkle with amusement as he realizes how successful his plan is. The playful aspect of his personality comes through here, as he's enjoying the wit-based victory. He's using his small wit to manipulate the situation, and the panel highlights that Garerit knows he's in control, even if Garna doesn't fully realize it yet.

SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "He has no idea. This is going perfectly." "We're doing so well at this pace we just might make it before sundown."

(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 4 - Close-Up Panel)

Garerit's satisfied grin as he rides the tree, looking ahead. His face is pleased with his success, and there's a twinkle in his eye, signifying his awareness of the illusion he's created. This small moment emphasizes how Garerit can outsmart the giant while maintaining a sense of humor and confidence in the situation. There's a playful element to Garerit's character here, and this panel highlights the ongoing theme of wits over brute strength.

SB (Garerit - Thought Bubble): "Let's see how long it takes him to realize he's carrying me."

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You're doing great, better than expected."

(Ch5 Pg8 Panel 5 - Wide Panel)

In this wide panel, Garerit and Garna continue along the road with the tree. The illusion of Garerit holding up the branches remains intact, and the two of them make their way through the forest. The size contrast is evident again, with Garerit small on the tree, while Garna carries the trunk. This panel shows them moving toward the next stage of their journey, and it visually reinforces the teamwork and misunderstanding between the two characters.

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Let's keep going. We're almost there."

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Right, I'm bearly tired at all."

Hi Everyone,

I must admit I'm feeling pretty lonely as a writer and I've always wanted to find a writing partner or people to discuss stuff over with..

Anyone feel the same?

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Hi all!

Looking to get some clarification on the art of written pitch sessions here at Stage 32.

I have pitched many times with high marks across the board, and some have resulted in script requests.

My 2 page pitch is based on Stage 32 coverage that resulted in a "Double-Recommend" rating.

I have submitted over 10 times, and the majority of the feedback is positive and professional, with improvement tips that I truly appreciate.

I hesitated to write this post lest I sound like I am complaining, but it is the exact opposite. I want the BEST pitch possible and am willing to do whatever it takes and rework/rewrite it as often as it takes.

My question, however, is this: I have been receiving contradictory information from one exec to another.

One Example:

1) "The pitch needs to leave someone wanting to learn more about the project by requesting the script."

2) "I would love to see the full story’s synopsis to better understand how it develops from beginning to end."

I understand that this may be related to one's preferences, but should it be something that is called out or is this just the nature of the beast and to be expected?

Lastly, I have had execs mention that the character's should do this or should do that. Most of what they mention is covered in great detail in the script and unrolls during the character's journey. So, I guess I am wondering whey would someone would ask what would seem like obvious questions.

Please understand that I thrive on criticism as I know I don't know everything, but I am having a hard time finding the sweet spot as the target seems to be always moving.

I tailor each pitch after researching that particular user, doing my best to hit their target.

If you're still reading, sorry for the book, but I would love any tips or info anyone could pass along.

Thanks!

I'm reluctant to participate in the lounge since I've never had a project produced. I have six scripts "completed" (which is a nebulous word in writing). I've made the finals in several competitions and had a few options. But have had nothing produced. Any advice on where to go from here?

We often hear that a strong plot twist can elevate a story, but sometimes it risks feeling forced or gimmicky. As writers, we’re constantly balancing surprise with coherence, making sure the audience stays engaged without losing trust in the narrative.

Screenwriters, I’d love to hear your thoughts:

How do you decide if a plot twist truly serves your story?

Do you prefer subtle reveals or big, shocking turns?

What’s the most effective plot twist you’ve ever written or seen on screen?

And if you’ve explored resources, what Stage 32 blog posts on screenwriting have inspired you?

For inspiration, here’s the Stage 32 blog collection: https://www.stage32.com/blog/tags/screenwriting-25

For all fans of the Scriptnotes podcast out there, they wrote a book!

(https://www.forbes.com/sites/joshweiss/2025/12/02/john-august-and-craig-...)

(Please note that this is done as it would be a script for a comic, I have a background in comics, so I use comic terms for the script. I do hope to get this made as a movie or short TV show. I'm looking for feedback on the pages, if you can take the time to read and leave a review in the comments. replace panels with shot.)

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Garna, the giant, still towering over Garerit, now with a slightly puzzled yet hopeful expression. The giant has his hands resting on a huge, fallen pine tree, looking at Garerit with expectation. His body language conveys effort but also trust, as though he believes the tailor's small size could be an asset in his task. In contrast, Garerit is standing calmly next to the tree, looking up at the giant, but his posture is unfazed. His crossed arms give the impression that he is taking his time to consider the request before answering. The size contrast between the giant and the tailor is stark, making the giant's request feel comically disproportionate.

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You've shown cleverness, little man. Will you help me carry this tree? It is too much for one like me to bear. I need to haul this tree back and have it cut up for firewood before the night sets in."

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Garerit, with a raised eyebrow, responded to Garna's request with a wry smile. He seems to be giving a moment of pause as if considering the giant's offer. There is a slight sense of amusement in his expression, suggesting that he might have an idea, but it also reflects tactical thinking rather than outright refusal. Garna's large hands continue to rest on the tree; the sheer size of it dwarfs the tiny tailor in comparison.

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Hmm... You want me to help carry this tree?"

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Garna is confused as he tries to process Garerit's words. His furrowed brow and wide eyes show that he's not sure what the tailor means, and he's eager for clarification. The tree trunk is still between them, emphasizing the disparity in size and strength. The simpler, more direct nature of Garna's character contrasts with Garerit's cleverness and more subtle approach. This moment is a key point of misunderstanding, where the giant believes the tailor must have misunderstood the task.

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "Why yes, it is far too big for me alone!"

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Garerit gives a knowing grin, clearly having an idea of how to turn the situation to his advantage. He steps slightly away from the tree, his hands still crossed as he eyes the situation. There is a sense of quiet confidence in his demeanor, which is a stark contrast to the struggling giant. The panel should feel like Garerit's preparation for a solution that won't involve brute force. The giant's back is turned slightly, as if he's waiting for Garerit to make his move, adding a sense of anticipation to the moment.

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "It's simple. We'll move the tree in a way you've never imagined before. But first, let's see if you understand the concept of balance."

(Ch5 Pg6 Panel 5 - Full-Width Panel)

Garerit stands confidently, with a grin on his face, as he gestures to the huge tree trunk. He directs Garna, the giant, who is now bending down and looking at the trunk with a sense of duty. The panel should emphasize the size contrast once again, showing the tailor's small figure and the gigantic trunk that Garna will carry. Garerit's posture is casual and nonchalant, clearly in control of the situation despite the physical disparity.

SB (Garerit - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You take the trunk, Garna. It's big enough for your strength. I'll handle the branches. They'll be easier for me to carry!"

(Ch5 Pg6 Panel 6 - Medium Panel)

Garna, still holding the trunk, gave Garerit a look of confusion. The giant is puzzled but willing to follow the tailor's instructions. His brow is furrowed, and his eyes squint as though trying to process the logic behind Garerit's division of labor. This moment underscores the contrast in their thinking; the giant's approach is physical, while Garerit's is based on cleverness and practicality.

SB (Garna - Speaking, Dialogue Bubble): "You'll carry the branches? But... Why not the trunk?"

SB (Gerarit - Thought Bubble): "A little finesse is all it takes. Strength is not the answer—balance is."