Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32!

Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32!

Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32!

Tom Stohlgren
Tom Stohlgren
4 years ago

Preciously few screenwriters strike gold with their first scripts, such as those written by Sylvester Stallone (Rocky), Kevin Smith (Clerks), Charlie Kaufman (Being John Malkovich), Kimberly Smith (Boys Don’t Cry), and Matt Damon and Ben Affleck (Good Will Hunting) among a dozen other gifted writers.

Most screenwriters take a circuitous route to “getting their first feature film produced.” I thought it would be instructive to share the story of my journey in hopes of gathering diverse stories from others as a means for novice screenwriters to moderate expectations. Spoiler alert: Despite my best efforts, my journey to becoming a produced writer took eight years.

In the beginning, I set a goal. My goal was to write compelling feature scripts with female and minority leads across genres and budgets with an eye on return on investment. Easy, right? Not so! I admit I strayed a bit with some storylines for various reasons, but I kept my goal in mind even if I was naive.

I understood the statistical odds of success. I read that one out of 3,000 good feature 3,000 scripts gets produced. Knowing that established, well-connected, and represented writers sell more scripts than novices, I knew my odds would be less. I would have to work even harder and smarter than others. I never let the odds stop me. I jokingly told my wife that I may have to write 3,000 scripts. Maybe I wasn’t kidding.

Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32

I kept my day job as a research scientist and ecologist. That paid the bills while I worked part-time on scrips. Family always comes first.

I did my research. I found and read 100 or more successful scripts from online sources. My training as a scientist helped me identify similarities and differences, and strengths and weaknesses in the scripts, but I was reminded that art is subjective. Every script was wildly different and compelling – and that was my epiphany. All I had to do was write 3,000 wildly different, compelling scripts.

I bought The Screenwriters Bible by David Trottier and studied it well. I grabbed many other screenwriting tips online (e.g., Stage 32, YouTube, and others). Formatting scripts wasn’t difficult, although I was amazed how many produced scripts I read bent the rules seemingly without punishment.

I used open-source screenwriting software (cheap) and practiced by writing scripts from stories with which I was familiar (i.e., five scripts from novels I had written over the years, and five new stories already in my head). Flow, character arcs, story beats, realistic and crisp dialogue… Those were hard. This was going to take more practice than I had planned.

Over the next four years, I paid a script consultant to provide honest evaluations of my first five scripts. This was money well spent. It was like being tutored— or taking a master class. I had nuns as teachers who used rulers to measure pain. How tough could a dozen rewrites be? In truth, I loved the one-on-one interaction and I learned a lot.

Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32

Over the next 4 years, I graduated to Final Draft software, and continued posting scripts, while building connections on Stage 32 (Member since January 2016). I listened closely to all feedback, especially the harshest reviews.

I received helpful feedback from Stage 32 connections in the form of logline reviews and over 950 private messages. I wasn’t shy about asking for helpful advice. There is always something to learn, especially from Stage 32 CEO RB's Coffee and Content segments. But, most importantly, I kept writing scripts .

On the plus side, I see the movies in my head as I write them. On the negative side, producers and directors often see or want different movies from the ones I see in my head. So far, I’ve received over 4,500 “passes” (rejections) on submitted loglines and synopses. That’s the reality of the business. I never get discouraged. I kept writing feature scripts and TV pilots. I’m up to 60 scripts, 8 TV pilot scripts, and one full 13-episode season of scripts for a TV drama (covers pictured below)

I’ve spent a lot of time developing marketing materials such as film proposals, TV Bibles, and Look Books. Marketing materials promote my scripts on LinkedIn, Facebook, and Twitter. A wise producer once told me, “It’s not who you know, but who knows you". It’s difficult to assess how well marketing efforts pay off, but I’ll assume they work a little. I carefully check every email, logline, synopsis, and script for spelling, grammar, and punctuation errors before sending ANYTHING out. I have “first readers” for scripts (friends and colleagues). More eyes are better.

I optioned my first script five years into this eight-year journey, but the period movie was too expensive to produce.

Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32

After six and a half years, I landed a Literary & Talent Manager from a connection on Stage 32, who signed me because I had written over 40 scripts, had one script optioned, and she thought many of my other scripts were very promising. Thank you, Stage 32!

I optioned four scripts in the past two years. Finally, a producer/director (Jihane Mrad) produced one of my scripts this past month in South Africa. I felt so honored. It took several rewrites after lots of suggestions from her, her staff, and the actors, the title was changed to a better one. And, on the first day of filming about one month ago, I was paid -- after eight years in the business. I have two more scripts are in pre-production with another producer, and things are looking up, partly because I’ve never looked down, only forward!

Like most of us, it didn’t happen overnight. I hesitate to calculate my hourly wage for the past eight years, but there are things to celebrate. I have dozens of “connections” with producers and directors that I now count as “real friends." I’m free to send some of them my latest film proposals, and my manager continually looks for new outlets for my work.

I will continue to post scripts on Stage 32, and share marketing materials on social media. Most importantly, I continue to write every day. I write six to eight feature scripts per year, but my full-time job is enjoying life, enjoying my family, and daydreaming about the next big story.

Over 80% of my scripts have female or minority leads (though I know only 30% of movies made do the same). I know the odds — but it’s the right thing to do. All I know is, don’t count me out. Any “success” I have is due largely to my new friends, colleagues, and connections in the industry. My first script was not an Academy Award-winning blockbuster, but my next one might be!

PS I’d like to hear from other writers about their journey to getting their first screenplay produced. Send your stories to tjstohlgren@gmail.com

About Tom Stohlgren

Screenwriter Lands Literary Agent through Networking on Stage 32

By day, Tom Stohlgren was a Senior Research Scientist at the Natural Resource Ecology Laboratory, Colorado State University in Fort Collins, CO. He wore Hawaiian shirts every day to teach classes, advise graduate students, and conduct research part-time. He received a Bachelor's degree in Forestry from the University of California, Berkeley; Master's degree in Biology from California State University, Fresno; and, Ph.D. in Ecology from the University of California, Davis. Tom is recognized as one of the top ten most productive scientists in the world in the field of biological invasions. He is invited around the world to lecture. He has published over 200 scientific papers and a textbook on methods of assessing plant diversity.

In his copious spare time, Dr. Stohlgren is a novelist, screenwriter, and playwright. He’s published six novels, completed one additional novels, written over 50 feature screenplays, one three-act play (a comedy), and thirteen pilot scripts for a potential TV series. Two of his novels ended up as finalists for the Colorado Authors Award for Best Fictional Novel. His goals are to: (1) “See the world as it should be, rather than how it is,” as Don Quixote would say; (2) entertain first, and educate second; and (3) replace despair, panic, and gullibility with scientific reasoning, education, and hope.

Five of Tom’s scripts have been optioned. One of the feature scripts is being filmed in South Africa.

For four years, Tom was tutored and mentored by Emmy Award-winning Lee Levinson of Lee Levinson Productions (NY) to make his scripts "camera-ready." Tom is always open to working collaboratively, editing as you see fit, or writing for hire. Tom's scripts are fresh, authentic, and engaging! Give them a read!

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19 Comments on Tom's Article

Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Special thanks to Taylor C, Baker for the opportunity to contribute and help along the way! I'm a HUGE fan of Stage 32!
4 years ago
Connie Barretta
Author, Screenwriter
Tom, I’m in awe reading this and inspired by your determination! I’m really a little late going into Screenwriting because I have been a Registered Nurse for 50 years. I have managed to write two novels, however,  along the way and some children’s books. But screenwriting has me intrigued. Thank you for sharing the story of your amazing journey. 
4 years ago
Taylor C. Baker
Actor, Screenwriter, Content Creator, Producer
You are simply the best Tom! Thank YOU for your amazing and inspirational contributions to the Stage 32 community! I am endlessly impressed/inspired by the 4500 times you put yourself, and your writing out there!
4 years ago
Brywn Philips
Screenwriter
Wow! Thank you Tom for your inspiring TRUTH! I've recently turned 51 and feel a little sheepish starting so late, but then I think, "well, maybe by 61 I'll have some writing success"...why not?!?" You motivate me.
4 years ago
Brywn Philips
Screenwriter
Hi Carine,  welcome to almost 50!!
4 years ago
Hi Brywn, at almost 50 I feel similarly to you and @Tom Stohlgren 's story fills me with inspiration and motivation!
4 years ago
Maurice Vaughan
Screenwriter
Congrats on getting repped, Tom. Most of my main characters are female (like your scripts). Sometimes they're minority. Other characters in my scripts are usually minority.
4 years ago
Maurice Vaughan
Screenwriter
Sure thing!
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Maurice, let's keep it up!
4 years ago
Valerie Michele Oliver
Director of Development, Producer, Screenwriter, Creative Executive, Executive
Tom! Now why do I hear Tony Bennett singing and swinging "The Best Is Yet To Come" while finger-snapping after reading your guest column today? Well...I guess because you're demonstrating that it's true! Awesome to read that you're working with Art as well. I feel like making a Martini and dancing! All the best continued success with your career, family and loved ones.
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Valerie. And yes, the best is yet to come!
4 years ago
C Cannon Rosenau
Screenwriter
Great work, Tom! We often hear it takes about 10 years to get things movin' in this career. Your patience and persistence truly paid off. Also nice work with the discipline...40 scripts and with a brain-using job at that. Bravo!!!!
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Cannon. Let's keep writing! Cheers!
4 years ago
Bob Harper
Screenwriter, Director, Producer, Animator
Great post, very inspiring. You only don't "make" it if you give up!
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
So right, Bob!
4 years ago
Jorge Garza
Screenwriter, Publisher, Editor
Inspirig story! I'm glad you're finally getting there!
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Jorge. As long as the ideas keep flowing, I'll keep writing!  Same for you, I trust!
4 years ago
Ingrid Wren
Screenwriter, Author
Thank you for sharing your inspiring story!  I've been working on my current screenplay intermittently for the past five years, and it's almost there.  I've found that life, the universe and everything can get in the way of my creative pursuits, and maintaining discipline such as you describe is critical.  Best of luck with your script in production and thank you again for sharing.
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Hi Ingrid, life is a marathon, not a 100-yard-dash, so keep going one step at a time. Cheers, Tom
4 years ago
Kenneth M Sutton
Music Composer, Screenwriter, Singer, Sound Designer, Author
HEY!! That's great news! Congrats to Tom on his hard work. God Bless you Tom Stohlgren!!
4 years ago
Peter Killam
Crew, Photographer (Still), Screenwriter
Woah Tom you are an inspiration to us all! You could write a book on self motivation, discipline,  and work ethic. Looking forward to your future movies!
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Kenneth. Let's never give up!
4 years ago
Andrea Zastrow
Screenwriter
An inspiring read.  I found myself frequently nodding in agreement.  Wow, what an incredible journey! Congratulations to you, and thanks for keeping it real in a positive and even humorous way.  
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, James. I recently retired to devote more time to writing. 
4 years ago
James E Dahl
Screenwriter
Wow, Tom's story blew me away.  That is the epitome of dedication.  I am very impressed by his passion, and  how prolific he has been.  All done while holding onto his "real job."  Proves it can be done.  Way to go Tom!
4 years ago
Louisa Kendrick
Screenwriter, Actor, Director, Content Creator
Congratulations! How wonderfully Inspiring!  With my little 15 scrips I’m holding to catch up to you
4 years ago
Tom, please, I sent you an email
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Louisa! I think you might catch me!
4 years ago
Tasha Lewis
Actor, Author, Choreographer, Dancer, Director, Editor, Filmmaker, Marketing/PR, Narrator, Producer, Researcher, Screenwriter, Student, Translator, Voice Actor
Thank you Tom for sharing your testimony and meeting a need in the industry of more diversity.
4 years ago
Tasha Lewis
Actor, Author, Choreographer, Dancer, Director, Editor, Filmmaker, Marketing/PR, Narrator, Producer, Researcher, Screenwriter, Student, Translator, Voice Actor
Your welcome, Tom.
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Tasha. 
4 years ago
Andrew Macmillen
Actor, Author, Director, Playwright, Screenwriter
What a fabulously inspiring story for all of us. Never give up. Thank you 
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Andrew.
4 years ago
Cassie Greutman
Screenwriter
Very encouraging. Thanks for sharing :)
4 years ago
Juhani Nurmi
Screenwriter
Hi Tom! Cordial congrats and major kudos for your success story! I'm truly inspired and happy about your story, especially as I posted a rather somber letter at the Introduce Yourself section here about the age / nationality bias that I'm encountering regularly. I've been active for a few years here at Stage 32. Despite having some major heavy hitters (Marcus Nispel, Dan Myrick, Weta Workshop) attached to my projects, I have not been able to find legal representation. I'm starting to think that it's because I'm a foreigner (I live in Finland, Scandinavia) or my age (55). Well, you and Stephen King are great reminders to us all that none of us should NEVER GIVE UP ... just get a longer NAIL for all those rejection slips, haha! Godspeed, stay healthy and inspired! Cordially, Juhani from Helsinki, Finland 
4 years ago
Juhani Nurmi
Screenwriter
Many thanks for your kindness. Daisy White! A writer writes. 
4 years ago
Johan Moya Ramis
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Excellent and motivating. Thanks to share!!
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
You're welcome. Johan! 
4 years ago
Katherine Blessan
Screenwriter
Tom, I'm in awe at your dedication! Many would have given up at the rate of rejections you received. Well done for persevering and seeing every rejection as an opportunity to learn.
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Thanks, Let's keep at it!
4 years ago
Art Thomas
Producer, Business Affairs Consultant, Filmmaker
Congratulations Tom! Thanks for sharing your amazing journey. Wishing you the best of success. Proud of you
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
I needed your great help along the way many times, I'm forever grateful and the best is yet to come for our many projects together, my friend.
4 years ago
Harri-Pekka Virkki
Author, Stunt Performer
Real Monday motivation! Congratulations Tom! And thanks for sharing! DREAM!
4 years ago
Harri-Pekka Virkki
Author, Stunt Performer
Likewise! 
4 years ago
Tom Stohlgren
Author, Researcher, Screenwriter
Special Thanks, Harri-Pekka, Love your comments on Coffee and Content. Cheers
4 years ago
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