Introduce Yourself : Hi im new here , any feedback about my trailer by JohnMark Abela

JohnMark Abela

Hi im new here , any feedback about my trailer

Hi I'm new here ,

have just finished a horror short film trailer - ENVISION and hoping for a literary agency to represent my work. Interested, my email johnmarkabela@yahoo.com. any feedbacks/critics will be welcome

Maurice Vaughan

How's it going, JohnMark Abela? The trailer is interesting, but I wasn't able to understand the story from the trailer.

JohnMark Abela

Hey Maurice everything is good

, I hope your too!

Thanks for your comment.,

I did about The predictions and visions of Nostradamus .

I hope you get it now :D

Robert Russo

Its not really a trailer, it seems more like the opening minute of a film. I would watch some horror film trailers and compare yours to them and see what your missing. What is their structure, what are they including for dialogue from the film, etc. Id also just totally cut the first 15-20 seconds of words.

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, JohnMark Abela. I like the trailer, but I think it needs to be reworked so people can understand what's going on in it. And I agree with Robert Russo that the trailer is more of an opening minute of a film.

JohnMark Abela

Thank you Maurice and Robert for your suggestion , I will work on it ,, Thank you for your feedbacks! Much appreciated !

Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, JohnMark Abela.

Max Stravagar

Great trailer it didn't need words or captions to convey what the story is about... fantastic.

JohnMark Abela

Thank you Max much appreciated ! I hope a lot of people will watch this ,

John Ellis

You've got a trailer, so that means the film is complete, yes? You don't need a lit agent, you need a distributor.

JohnMark Abela

Hi John Ellis , thank you for reaching out ! Yes my film is completely ready , If you know a distributor by any chance just let me know thank you as I’m new into this industry , This film was made with passion and love

John Ellis

Sorry, I don't know any distros. One way to connect with some is to submit the film to festivals.

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