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EVERYBODY WANTS TO BE A ROBOT

EVERYBODY WANTS TO BE A ROBOT
By William Schumpert

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE: The ever ongoing struggle of depression as seen from the perspective of an individual. A dark comedy that will get you nowhere in life.

SYNOPSIS:

A man (appropriately named Unknown) struggles with depression as his mind (the Id, Ego and Super Ego) struggles through this dark comedy. He meets with friends and his inner self in a struggle from day in and out. Nothing really goes his way as he can imagine scenarios in his mind- a story about his continuous cycle. And when things seem to be going his way it doesn’t. The story ends when the mind seems to kill itself(?).

Nate Rymer

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William Schumpert

Thanks for the rating. The story is more than not based on my experiences of depression (back in Middle and High School).

Richard Buzzell

Good title. Logline needs work.

William Schumpert

Thanks for the suggestion. I’ll also be adding other work.

Tasha Lewis

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Anthony Dzansi

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