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On a crowded light rail. A couple with dreams of finding a seat miss the open seat available.
SYNOPSIS:
This is the Whole Story.
INT. LIGHT RAIL - AFTERNOON
The light rail pulls up to the station.
The doors open.
All the SEATS are FILLED with TWO SEATS EMPTY next to EACH OTHER.
A MAN and WOMAN appear.
They both look around the light rail.
They never notice the two empty seats.
They walk and stand holding onto the straps.
They are the only ones standing.
MAN
I told you there would be no empty seats, it happens everyday.
The light rail doors close.
The light rail begins to move.
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