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MINE
By Jill Godley
A young woman becomes terrorized by a malevolent ghost in her mirror, urging her to carry out a deadly act and pushing her towards the brink of madness.
SYNOPSIS:
Emma wakes up every morning for months to find the words "It's mine, give it back" written on the walls of her room. The vengeful ghost refuses to stop plaguing her unless she kills the person who broke the suicide pact that led to his death.
MINE
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Unique concept, Jill Godley. I suggest adding an adjective for the girl.
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Interesting. So many questions: What does she have? What's her connections with the ghost? Why did the person break the suicide pact or was it murder? I would read this script. I agree with Maurice Vaughan , an adjective about the girl is needed.
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I'm intrigued to see how she will be pushed to commit this act. Brilliant logline!
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