Sounds interesting, Wayne Turmel. Here are a few suggestions for the logline:

#1) Make it clear who the main character is

#2) Add the story goal

#3) Add the stakes

Maurice, better?

I can tell who the main character is now, Wayne Turmel.

I think your logline needs a better flow. And loglines should be one or two sentences, but I suggest using one sentence. In my opinion, a one-sentence logline sounds better, and it takes less time for a producer, director, etc. to read it.

Your logline still needs the story goal (Example: The main character tries to survive, he fights to survive, he tries to uncover a mystery, etc.).

I suggest removing Kyle's name. Names in loglines are usually for well-known franchises (like Bruce Wayne) and biographies.

I also suggest removing the question at the end of your logline. Questions don't belong in loglines.

I see that the genre is Horror. The logline could be action, suspense, mystery. What makes this a horror film?