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PERFECT YOU
By Ciara Smith

GENRE: Sci-fi, Horror
LOGLINE:

Adriana must confront her stalker reflection if she wants to keep her identity.

Tasha Lewis

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Pat Savage

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Pat Savage

Interesting but a few words about the Sci+Fi description would define her stalker as an alien?

Marcos Fizzotti

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Maurice Vaughan

I like the title, Ciara Smith. I don't really understand the story from the logline, and I'm not sure what "confront her stalker reflection" means. Like her doppelganger? Here’s a template that might help with your logline:

After/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion), a _______ (an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality and the protagonist's position/role) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/participates/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”

The inciting incident can also be at the end of the logline: “A _______ (an adjective that describes the protagonist’s personality and the protagonist's position/role) tries to/attempts to/fights to/struggles to/strives to/sets out to/fights/battles/engages in/participates/competes/etc. _______ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes) after/when ______ (the inciting incident/the event that sets the plot in motion).”

And Christopher Lockhart has a great webinar on loglines. It’s called “How To Make Your Logline Attractive to A-List Actors, Producers, Directors, Managers, Agents, Financiers and Development Execs” (www.stage32.com/webinars/How-To-Make-Your-Logline-Attractive-to-A-List-A...).

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