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BERNADETTE

BERNADETTE
By Scott Alin

GENRE: Thriller, Horror
LOGLINE:

A hospice nurse struggles with reality when an elderly, comatose patient begins terrorizing her dreams--and then drags the nightmare into her waking life.

SYNOPSIS:

The depressed make such easy targets--so desperate for a sense of purpose without the resolve to fight. Their self-loathing and helpless guilt are lighthouses in the darkness...beacons to feed on for demons in this existential plane, searching for a physical body to call home. This story is about a demon named Bernadette, trapped in a comatose woman for 50 years, who just saw the glimmer of a beacon up ahead in the new shift nurse.

Leigh has just been hired in the hospice ward, yoked with guilt for a husband she doesn't love with a child she never wanted, and looking for any work that keeps her from home. Struggling with feelings that drain the color from her every day, she's terrified she's manifested a psychosis after her new patient begins haunting her dreams--and then her life. Is Leigh headed for a psychotic break, or is a supernatural entity seeking her soul? We all know demons exist--the question is, does Leigh?

Rutger Oosterhoff

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