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When two sisters receive an adopted girl into the family, their lives get filled with happiness; when their mother decides to separate them, they will go against anything to find her again.
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adopted one seems awkward. Can likely be stated in one sentence. Good start!
Thanks James, I thinks is better now.
Thank you Tomasz.
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adopted one seems awkward. Can likely be stated in one sentence. Good start!
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Thanks James, I thinks is better now.
Thank you Tomasz.
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