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THE RUBAIYAT OF OMAR KHAYYAM
By John Richard Sullivan
In a dramatic retelling of the famous poem, students and sultans, poets and dancers ruminate, discuss, and dispute the beauty and mystery of life and death.
THE RUBAIYAT OF OMAR KHAYYAM
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Hi John, I think this is an interesting idea, but your synopsis shows it much better than you logline. The second line of your synopsis would be a better logline for the project. I think you should start the logline, "In a dramatic retelling of a famous poem" and then add the second line of the synopsis.
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Lily Stecyuk Thanks for the 5-stars, Lily! Glad you liked it! :-)
Nathaniel Baker Thanks again for the 5-stars, Nathaniel! :-)
Molly Peck Yeah, the logline always trips me up because it's basically a synopsis of the synopsis. :-D Thanks for the feedback. It's been updated. :-)
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