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OK MOTHER
By John Michael German

GENRE: Horror, Thriller
LOGLINE:

A man, with obvious psychological problems, tries to gain his mothers favor at all costs.


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Everything about this script is for review only; If you are interested in any of these please contact, myself, John German.

SYNOPSIS:

OK Mother is a story about Franky, who has some psychological problems due to trying to get his mothers affection. This leads to Franky having "daymares". These include his room starting on fire and the ceiling collapsing on him. He comes out of these as his mother is yelling. As he continues to try and get his mothers attention, he stands in the mirror and takes his shirt off. He draws circles around his nipples and puts a smile on his Tummy. He names this person Tummy and talks to him, and Tummy talks back.

Eventually someone breaks into the house, which leads Franky, to go down stairs. The robber tells Franky it's best he goes away. That's when Tummy kicks in and tells Franky this is when he can win his mothers affection. Franky ends up mercilessly beating the robber to death. Franky then goes to tell his mother who is shocked and horrified. The short film ends with Frankie's mother, Connie, uttering OK Franky.

*Note: This is a 21 page short film.

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