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UNFOLLOW
By Rob Jones

GENRE: Comedy
LOGLINE:

A Hollywood extra becomes a worldwide phenomenon after he accidentally unfollows the worlds most famous actress on twitter.

SYNOPSIS:

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James Barber

The logline currently is a summary, but I am not sure where it is going. Help the reader to know that this is a comedy. Nothing may be at stake for the protagonist so give some hints that it will be comical/hilarious etc... Dropping a clue or two will enhance it's ability to attract your reader. Without more, at the moment I am not sure of what to expect and if I want to "watch it"

When an unknown Hollywood extra accidentally unfollows the world’s most famous actress he comically struggles to deal with becoming a worldwide phenomenon.

When an unknown Hollywood extra accidentally unfollows the world’s most famous actress on twitter, he bumbles and stumbles through the challenges of becoming a worldwide phenomenon overnight.

Rob Jones

Thanks for the advice James.Those do sound clearer.

Brian Largo

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Mista Martel

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Mista Martel

Sounds like a film I would love to see

Pier Robinson

I would love to see this as well!

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