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When she accidentally gets an email invite for a bachelorette party from a group of twenty-somethings she doesn’t know, a middle-aged woman will join them in Las Vegas for 24 hours she won’t forget.
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Sasha Remington has always focused on her job first, last and every point between. As one of the premier life insurance brokers in the country, she’s excellent at what she does. It’s about the only thing she does, too. Divorced with no children, she focuses everything into her job (much to the chagrin of her assistant Chaz).
When her longtime boss passes, and no one bothers to tell her, she’ll wonder if it’s all worth it.
Getting an email meant for another Sasha Remington inviting her to Kayla’s bachelorette party, Sasha will wind up going against everything in her brain telling her to focus on work and winds up in Las Vegas with three strangers young enough to be her children for a night of partying, UFC fights and shenanigans.
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this is not a logline, this is a statement, research what a logline is and what it includes, and try again.
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You might consider adding a phrase that more precisely teases that thing that she won't forget.
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