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CHARLOTTE GREENWOOD IN A FAIRY FANTASY
By Taisiya Carmin
Charlotte is taken by an unseen force to another dimension and finds out more about herself.
SYNOPSIS:
10 year old Charlotte Greenwood seems like your typical ordinary girl, but deep inside herself lies a secret not even Charlotte is aware of. On the evening of her 11th birthday, Charlotte is teleported into a world of mythical creatures, but not all are out to say hello, the dark fairy hears of her presence and sets out to remove her from the land, but is there method to his madness?
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This sounds like an exciting story, Taisiya Carmin. :D I think your logline needs some more details. Here's a logline suggestion: "After she's teleported to a world of mythical creatures, a typical (or a different adjective) girl with a secret buried deep inside of her tries to __________ (goal of story) so/in order to ________ (stakes).”
She's not trying to do anything in order to, she just finds out about herself.
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