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By Taisiya Carmin
A young girl accepts a ride from man who knows her. She thinks she recognises him but things don't go as planned.
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After a [adjective] young girl accepts a ride from a man who says he knows her, she...
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After a [adjective] young girl accepts a ride from a man who says he knows her, [she recognizes him as a child murderer and struggles to break free before being killed].
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