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HOSTAGES
By Michael David

GENRE: Thriller
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A top hostage negotiator goes rogue and takes a bus of school children hostage. It's up to the father of one of the hostages, a second-rate hostage negotiator, to negotiate their release before they are killed.

Amazing Kacee

Why is it up to one of the fathers?

Michael David

Amazing Kacee The father of the boy taken hostage is another hostage negotiator. In the screenplay, it is revealed that the "top hostage negotiator" will only deal with the father.

Billy Kwack

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Marcos Fizzotti

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Amazing Kacee

Thank you, Michael David - but why does the first thing happen, why does he go rogue? by the way, this reminds me of a Walker Texas Ranger episode.

Whitney Moore

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Whitney Moore

It's worth noting that I gave this five stars because it has peaked the interest of several other commentors which means it is interesting enough for people to want to know more. Also because it sounds effing awesome! ;)

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