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POLISHED BUSINESS

POLISHED BUSINESS
By Alana Gerdes

GENRE: Crime, Romance
LOGLINE:

Finding herself pregnant after a one-night stand, a nail salon owner starts laundering money to get out of her financial predicament, only to find that her baby daddy is an undercover FBI agent who is about to bust her employer.

SYNOPSIS:

Nancy, a struggling nail salon owner, has only ever cared about her work. But when she accidentally gets knocked up by a one-night stand, she needs to decide how she can keep her business afloat while taking care of the child and figuring out what kind of relationship she wants to have with the father. As if these life-changing choices weren’t enough, chance decided to complicate Nancy’s situation further as her baby daddy Nathan is an undercover agent at the local drug cartel for which Nancy launders money to take care of both her business and her child. When both her employer and Nathan find out about her dirty dealings, Nancy must find a way to get out of her predicament and prove that women, indeed, can have it all.

* Semifinalist Big Apple Film Festival Screenplay Competition (2022 Fall Edition) *

-> Pitch deck attached <-

POLISHED BUSINESS

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Maurice Vaughan

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Maurice Vaughan

Sounds like it's gonna be a suspenseful Crime/Drama, Alana Gerdes.

Alana Gerdes

Thank you Maurice Vaughan ! It‘s coming along well, can‘t wait to share it!

Tasha Lewis

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Maurice Vaughan

You're welcome, Alana Gerdes. Looking forward to hearing more about it!

Derek C. Block

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Nate Rymer

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Arthur Charpentier

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Rutger Oosterhoff

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Marcel Nault Jr.

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Marcel Nault Jr.

Very tragic. I'm hoping your protagonist makes it out in the end.

Alana Gerdes

Marcel Nault Jr. Hi Marcel, feel free to check out the attached pitch deck under the link "View screenplay". You'll notice that the story is funnier than expected (happy end included :-) ).

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