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HAVEN OF DANTE
By Leonardo Ramirez
After a brutal attack resulting in the annihilation of her family, a courageous young woman is compelled to prevent a secret society born from the nine circles of hell from enslaving humanity.
SYNOPSIS:
In 1306, Dante Alighieri traversed the nine circles of hell - part of a quest to ease his soul of the loss of his beloved Beatrice. The nine circles became incensed at the gall of him leaving their realm unscathed. In their ire, they formed, “The Aristocracy” – a syndicate responsible for all of the evil in the world with a presence in every level of society. Every few generations, a surge of evil makes it necessary for the “witness” to appoint a Dante heir to the mantle of stopping an insidious plot by the Aristocracy to enslave humanity. This time, they aim to do that by a tectonic device created by Haven’s father, Roberto Dante, head of Dante Tech. Unbeknownst to her, it is up to Haven to stop them. Using her newfound abilities, she must now battle the demons without as well as within.
Personal Connection: Many years ago, my wife was kidnapped and assaulted at gunpoint. She not only survived but thrived. This is a story of hope for those who have shared a similar experience.
Feature screenplay available upon request.
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No problem, Leonardo Ramirez.
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This is clearly a winner!
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You're very kind, Richard Galbraith Thank you!
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Mark Miller Hi Mark - thank you so much for the kind rating!
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Geoff Hall You’re awesome brother. Thanks for the kind rating!
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J.B. Storey Thanks for the kind rating, JB :o)
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UPDATE: A pitch for HOD has been sent to Boman Modine for April 28th.
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DeShawn Buckner Thanks a ton for 5 stars!!
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No problem! I’d for sure watch that!
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UPDATE: I received my coverage notes from producer Scott Dow. The notes were amazing and I'm in the process of implementing them. But he also wants to continue the conversation so we've connected via email for continued dialogue. Very exciting!
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Thank you so much for the rating Araab Khan !
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When you mentioned good old Dante, I was hooked. The story of a secret society controlling the Nine Gates of Hell... As long as your characters are fleshed out and not clichés, this is going to be a wild ride.
On a side note, I'm sorry for what happened to your wife. It must've been quite the ordeal. :(
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@Marcel Thanks so much Marcel. For the rating and the kind note. I’m grateful that my wife not only survived but today she is thriving. Take care, my friend.
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So good! I thought you packed a ton of insight into the plots of your other two projects while keeping the loglines tight. Not an easy job, but you pulled if off!
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That means the world to me, Sarah Kennedy Thank you so very much!
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@Efrain Perez You rock my friend. Thank you!!!
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Beautiful pitch deck, Leonardo Ramirez !
@Robin Gregory - thank you so much Robin!!
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Thanks Mark Gosney !!
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You're welcome Leonardo, I really like this a lot!!
Thanks so much, @Mark Deuce!!!