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CODE 4
By Jason Mirch
When a 30-year-old cold case is reopened, an ambitious female homicide detective joins forces with her reckless, bounty hunter best friend, and the duo’s long-feuding fathers, to find answers.
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Sounds like fun feature! One consideration: If you remove “female”, then the word “ambitious” gets more emphasis, and the reader more easily anticipates conflict and humor with the “reckless” best friend. Since the pronoun “her,” is used, “female” won’t be missed.
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HEY! I KNOW THIS GUY! And I think BB brought up a great point.
I like this logline quite a lot, Sir!
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I second Barbara Lauria's post. You've already established that the lead detective is a female with the pronoun "her". Apart from that I think your logline flows well and sounds like a fun, action/comedy romp.
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Wondering why you named it code 4?
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