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STAR CHILD
By Billy Kwack
SYNOPSIS:
In the beginning magic fell in the hands of the enemy first, King, leader, Kings body is pure strong metal, strongest metal known. The 5 majors, masters of the elements, the army of planet crushers and there most important Dune, a dark healer. Making King and majors dangerous and unstoppable. The 100 innocent world's, can't stop them, they realize they must fight magic with magic
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Your logline makes so sense here is a link to create a killer logline - Good Luck! https://screencraft.org/2020/02/26/the-simple-guide-to-writing-a-logline/
Thank you Kacee, I tried my best
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Hey Billy. I think I kind of understand the basic premise and can maybe help you on your logline a little. (Six heroes with varying degrees of elemental power must stop a seemingly indestructible King and his minions from (ruling? destroying?) the "100 worlds" and their innocent inhabitants, or face destruction themselves.) Lmk if this works?
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A three! Thanks Ben
Awesome Frank
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Thank you Nate
Thank you Wally
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it could be cool I think it needs a proof read if you haven't sorry to judge