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SNOOPERS
By John Clive Carter
After the pilot of a super-secret RAF reconnaissance plane is rendered unconscious during an emergency landing in the Russian arctic, untested First Officer “Afterburner” Turner must bring his doubting crew of linguists and techies together to prevent Russian mercenaries seizing control of the priceless aircraft.
(NB this is currently written as a British crew but could be easily adapted to USAF crew.)
SNOOPERS
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Love this John. I might be tempted to remove 'uses his special skills for foreign languages' as I feel this is already well-handled by the phrase 'super translator.' I love the tantalising aspect of 'keep his secret past hidden'. Does 'save the crew' give away the ending? Might something like, 'Parlour must use his super translator skills if he is to outwit their captors and save the lives of the other crew members,' not present the reader with the full picture? Sounds really intriguing though.
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Thanks David, input much appreciated. Now edited. I've also uploaded the script and (fairly basic) KV.
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