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SPECIAL ANGEL GUIDE

SPECIAL ANGEL GUIDE
By Delores Wheeler

GENRE: Drama
LOGLINE:

A homeless man is befriended by a recently divorced woman on the brink of being homeless.  Their friendship helps each on the path to a rewarding life.

SYNOPSIS:

Matt, a longtime homeless man, meets Deanna, who is struggling with her recent financial ruin. Each teaches the other survival and the path to wealth on many levels. The sceenplay is based on the book, "The Smartest Man I Ever Knew," which is available on Amazon.

Cara Rogers

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Cara Rogers

Repetition of "homeless" caught my attention, and would like more clarity versus general statement "path to a rewarding life." Sounds like an interesting storyline.

Hunter Huiet

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Sav Cornin

What's the conflict?

Matthew Parvin

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Tasha Lewis

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Eric Sollars

Interesting.

Drew Paige

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Maria Restivo Glassner

I am still working on improving my pitch abilities but from the formula's I have learned from an udemy course with Jeffery Schechter it is important to have first the flawed or broken person with a haunted life get involved in a mission or journey, and then there is a surprise twist that with effort and sacrifice wiill help them resolve their past ghosts. So you could say A woman on the brink of destitution from a bad divorce meets a homeless man who is (insert his issue, veteran?). They struggle to get back on their feet when ( insert insurmountable problem). She inspires him to fight to get his life back while discovering her true value as an independent woman . I think I am making it too long lol. Anyway hope that is somewhat helpful!

Nate Rymer

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Rich Wingerter

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Rich Wingerter

I'd like to see a little more in the synopsis.

Robin Gregory

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Mirella Muffarotto

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