Hey everybody This Is Kiara It's a new year and that means its time to start something fresh and new i written a few episodes recently and i wonder what needs to be edited the format or the dialogue? its hard because i never been an actual screenwriter before, but here is a clip of the show the episode is Paige's date with Thomas they sit down at a restaurant and he's a real mottormouth, should the script have a little adjustments
Animation : Which Animated Adult Series Should start i with to publish? Thomas or The Coles this show is tv-14 by Kiara P Oxley
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Hi Kiara. It's great to get out there and try. I would suggest enrolling in a screenwriting class or workshop and getting some direct feedback from a script reader or script doctor.
It can sometimes be distracting to hear an AI voice read dialog and maybe take away from your writing.
Good luck!
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Bob gave you great advice, Kiara P Oxley. I also suggest reading scripts to see how they're formatted.
You can read Stage 32 members' scripts here: www.stage32.com/loglines
Here are websites to download scripts: www.nyfa.edu/student-resources/10-great-websites-download-movie-scripts/
And Stage 32 has screenwriting webinars: www.stage32.com/webinars/tag/screenwriting
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ok guys! sounds great well as i said mr harper this project is not done yet, i will find someone in my area i am from maryland
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do not worry maurice i have a grammar editor too , i am not going to give up