Advice and thoughts please...
My first feature screenplay has been optioned by a UK producer - we signed the deal two weeks ago using an industry standard template. This is my first time with an option, so you can imagine, I'm feeling happy about something finally happening - woohoo! The producer has been busy looking for directors, and seems keen on one in particular, with credentials and success (and writing credits - see later) under her belt. This director has, in short order, reviewed the screenplay and come back with notes. Great - I expected that.
Here's the thing - the notes cover some things I might have anticipated - and I welcome the feedback, but the main issue (for me) is that the director is proposing a huge revamp of the whole story. Location, background, cultural references, characters and focus - they've all been replaced by her ideas, and it all feels a very long way from my original concept.
This is not just an edit, a polish, a clean-up - it's a rewrite from start to finish - 100% different. I thought I had a good handle on who my characters are - how they speak, their flaws and qualities etc but this new version, (which to be fair, retains a few vestigial story elements), has characters with the same names, with new and different motivations, and I don't recognize them.
Maybe it's a good problem to have, but since this is my first experience of taking a script into development, I'm not sure how usual this is. There's no money until the producer finds funding, so I won't be paid for any rewriting, and I'm half wondering if this is some kind of bait-and-switch?
Has this ever happened to you, and if so, how did you handle it? TIA.
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Steve Mallinson, not only is this element of screenwriting not talked about much, when it is, it's talked about by people with little to no experience.
My advice here is to tread carefully, take all op...
Expand commentSteve Mallinson, not only is this element of screenwriting not talked about much, when it is, it's talked about by people with little to no experience.
My advice here is to tread carefully, take all opinions with a grain of salt, and do your due diligence on who's giving them. There's already some quite bizarre comments in the replies.
I'm afraid this is a creative pain that will be perennial for as long as you collaborate with others. It will crop up during development, it will crop up during the shoot, it will crop up during editing, it will crop up during distribution. There is no getting away with it and it's tough for any artist to go through, as you have a vision in your mind's eye and most likely something to say in the process. Finding peace with it isn't easy either, or even possible sometimes. Just know that you are going through something every working writer does, even those who direct their own material.
Also know this though; you are further ahead than 99.999% of writers ever get. This is a wonderful place to be in terms of career building as you're, at worst, attached to a project that's circulating with investors, producers, and talent.
The producer should be doing what's best for the project, so try to default to that assumption first. Talk with them when you can and learn their reasoning. It's a lot easier to swallow the frog when you know it's less a matter of taste and moreso a matter of logistics, marketing, production value, etc.
At the end of the day, the person to reflect with is yourself. You're an independent artist cutting your own path. What you're comfortable with is your business and you need not justify yourself to anyone. You're going to get people who'll tell you they'd stick by their guns, demand complete control, and insist on gild rates, which is good for them, but they'll most likely be telling you the same in ten years when you've made three films and they haven't even got an option. Been there. Few what to work their way up through the trenches.
In this case, the director might be being a little bullish. I don't know. I had that with an actor who wanted to attach to a project once. They fancied themselves as a producer and had a lot of criticisms of the script. In that case, it stopped us attaching them as they came across as too difficult. One always has to ask, why would anyone attach themselves to something they didn't at least love 90% of? To be frank, it always smacks of desperation and entitlement to me.
On the flip side, I was brought in to rewrite of a script earlier this year. The producer was a huge name. One of the biggest in recent history. The writer was a nobody. The script objectively needed a lot of work. I wasn't interested in a credit. This writer would have seen a feature film produced, been linked to a big name, and had what they'd be credited for massively improved in the background. They chose to be awkward and the project died. Now they have nothing.
These days, I release my spec scripts as novellas first. That means there's a version as per how my mind's eye sees it out there on the record. That keeps me creatively satisfied because I know trying to get into film and trying to maintain creative control are two massively opposed forces.
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It's no longer your script, which is hard to swallow but if you're not directing then it's no longer the story you're telling.
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Great advice there - thanks everyone.
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I think the ultimate goal of every screenwriter is to see their script see the daylight. If that's what you wish then go with the flow and do whatever it takes to see if not your story your characters come to life.
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To zag here -- at a point though, if you can already tell you wouldn't be in love with a potential future film made off your script given the changes required, then it's okay to step away and let this...
Expand commentTo zag here -- at a point though, if you can already tell you wouldn't be in love with a potential future film made off your script given the changes required, then it's okay to step away and let this option fade out. Or let the director take full control to do what they want to do. There really is nothing worse in this biz than having your name attached to something you don't love or you don't feel proud of, except doing 100x the amount of effort than you initially set out to do to come to that result. There's no shame in moving too hastily at times due to the excitement and possibilities, but realizing an errant step and letting go to protect yourself is also a completely valid option. It's much more spiritually freeing to let go sometimes than to marathon on the rewrite treadmill for what will eventually become diminishing marginal returns on your effort. Having a produced credit ain't everything, but it is the only thing. Just be careful what you sign up for.