Your Stage : Short Film Critique by Johnathan Huslage

Hello everyone! I recently shot a short film called 'Trust' and was wondering if it would be possible to get a little feedback. This is only my second short since I left film school and was curious about some of the different aspects (cinematography, lighting, editing, acting, directing, writing) and if anything really stuck out. You can leave in the comments or just message me. Any info would be appreciated! -John Here's the link: https://vimeo.com/138557078