Your Stage : What do you think about my logline? by Imola Orbán

I’m a 14 years old dreamer director-screenwriter, and I wrote a logline for my future movie! What do you think about it? Feel free to ask me about the plot, I wrote it early in the morning and I have Asperger's syndrome, so maybe the synopsis wasn't that clear :) I am open to co-writing (collaborating) on the script! By the way, sorry for my bad English! :D https://www.stage32.com/profile/1156640/Screenplay/Strawberry-Fields