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This is an updated version of my previous logline 'Lost Soul'
A middle aged man ( Mark Loft) washes ashore with a notebook and an old storage trunk. A couple, whom seem to be in their 60's, take him in. Mark has forgotten most of his life but knows he used to be a writer; as time goes by he learns about life through Hank and Lucy's story of how they met and ended up where they are now. Unfortunately, he gains back his old memories and begins to question himself and whether or not he should go on living.
SYNOPSIS:
Mark Loft washes ashore after being pulled away from a plain crash. An elderly couple take him in; as they get to know him they tell him their story of how they met and where they are now. The more Mark learns about them the more he remembers about himself and begins to question himself and whether or not to take his own life. After sometime of getting to know Hank and Lucy he decides to go on foot to find those he has done wrong and ask for forgiveness.
Sounds interesting although the log line seems way too long and the synopsis way too short.