Post your loglines. Get and give feedback.
A collegiate track coach faces a professional and personal crisis when her former Olympic teammate admits to doping. Her life is further complicated when she discovers a troubled girl with uncanny natural talent.
SYNOPSIS:
Tydie seems like the woman who has it all: an Olympic gold medal in the 4 x 4 relay, a loving husband pursuing his own Olympic dream, and her dream job as a university track coach. But her life is upended when an ex-teammate admits to having used performance-enhancing drugs, meaning that her gold medal, honor, and job are all at risk of being lost. All of this is further complicated when she meets Dan'yella, a mouthy teenager in foster care with uncanny natural running ability. As Tydie fights to keep her gold medal, she must also fight to keep Dan'yella on the right track...but what if she loses both?
Rated this content
Rated this content
1 person likes this
Hi Jonathan, this story sounds interested, but the two parts of the logline feel very disconnected. Finding a throughline to connect the two storylines and adding it to the logline will really help strengthen it.