This is a Short Script (25 pgs)

Lisa, thanks so much for taking time out to read the feedback & provide notes! I appreciate it all! Quincy/Samuel - I did read although as flawed as I am I probably didnt even realize I forgot to change. will do ASAP Luke - Was a former teammate of Sam (High School) but now is a successful business mind (Agent/Legal type). Put him in to kinda of be an opposite of Sam. though he wasnt a good athlete, he became successful, which should be motivation for Sam but is actually a hard dose of reality and a slap in the face (as a former athlete, the athlete mentality sometimes makes us feel more important or like we should he ahead of the 'average' because we are skilled) Ending - I agree 100%.I will work on this ALOT!