Success Stories: OCT'18 5th Draft, 4th Shot (Well, technically 1st with new draft).

5th Draft, 4th Shot (Well, technically 1st with new draft).

There have been some major improvements in my 5th draft of "Mascot", not to mention to the pitch. After all the "Passes" I was starting to wondering when I was going to get my next request, especially with a lot of reports telling me my protagonist lacked motivation, which I strongly disagree with (That said I may not be presenting it right in the pitch), and the latestest saying he needs flaws. He has plenty but I still plan to look into both...In any case last time I was requested, I sent a version 4 that pales in comparison to my Version 5, so maybe my best version yet can finally convince a studio to say "Yes!"

Brian Joseph Spero Jr.

Thanks Joey! I hope so too.

Nkosi Guduza

Ha, aren't these two Joey Tuccio and Kathryn Rushent brilliant. I think Kathryn put on an inspiring message for me or liked a comment, perhaps with a smiley icon, and Joey... well fabulous... x

Brian Joseph Spero Jr.

Ya. I have to admit. Like the screenwriting class I'm in, I'm getting more than I expected! I've always given up on past dreams...But this is the first one I can't put down!

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